Talk:Engineered System Context

The article is in good condition for the 0.50 version.

Description: OK

Balance: OK

Scope: OK

Writing: some minor corrections noted below

Citations: None

References: Single INCOSE reference may be a bit too little

Glossary: Product "System Context" and "Systems Approach" glossary links have no content

Cross-Linkages: none

Maturity: NOt yet mature enough.

Minor corrections needed:

"internal of external user" should be "internal OR external USERS". "A significant aspect of Product systems IS", not "ARE". - DONE 8/17/2011

"Part of getting the right product may need the negotiation of changes..." doesn't read correctly - DONE 8/17/2011. Wording changed to clarify.

"...can be used to enable the acquire supply of a product..." does not read correctly. - DONE 8/17/2011.

EIA 632 has a good section on the scope of systems, which defines a Product in terms of the systems around it and clarifies he scoe of SE as it applies to the product systes. this could be added here to beef up the sources.